I went to a critique on Wednesday, the montly Pikes Peak Writers critique. Darby Karchut (forgive me if I spell the name wrong) was there to review the submissions. She said very good things about my writing, which is, once in a while, exactly what a writer needs to push them to that next level of productivity.
I have outlined my book 2 to 30 chapters now, my wife is reviewing that outline today at work. I have a few ideas for reorganizing book 1, and a chapter I wrote for book 2 is going to be moved into book 1. I think the readers need to have a lot more exposure to the Hive. The Hive are cold and inhuman, logical to the extreme, and very ruthless in their goals. Their goals? More human hosts for their nanite intelligence.
Regardless, I'm writing again, although I haven't done so today. It's freezing in my office, and it's hard to write if you're not comfortable. I have turned up the heat....
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